Ya know... you did a great job in pointing out the mistakes that I made on this one, and you did well in correcting them. ^^

Well done love!!!

Now... if only we could get past the part we're at now... that is... if I can get a chance to get on.

*grins* I loved how Shadow just happened to pop into the shop and say things about Sally. I eagerly await the next chapter of this story. And Shadow, thanks for helping me with my amv/song problem! I really appreciate it! When/if I finish my little project. I'll let you know. :)

 

But truly, do continue this story! I'm lovin' it! (not to be mistaken with McDonalds.)

This is quality work. This sets the standard for my story that I am planning to write soon, grammer, spelling, and detailing-wise. Such detail, my mind is smiling because of it.
Shadening: DID YOU EVEN READ THE STORY? Come on, please reread it.

So thats what you meant when you said you were going to implement some of the RP we have been doing as of late. I see now love, nice thinking ^^