Awesome Chapter. Very well written. :) I can't help but wait eagerly for the next chapter. Just try not to take too long updating it, k? I want to see what Shadow has planned for Sonic. :) Maybe it's just the perverted side of me, but I can't help but think it's gonna be something R-rated. :P Whatever it is, Amy had BETTER NOT interrupt them. Update soon, please.
Hooray for updates!!!! This was a cute chapter. Although, I did wish Shadow would've attacked Amy..that would have been funny. Anymoo, can't wait to see what Shadow-sama is plotting. ^^
Lovely chapter as always, I can't wait to see what the "evil' shadow is cooking up for sonic
T-T You updated!!!! I'm so happy!! *cries* This was a nice, sweet, humorous, with a hint of cynicalness... chappy. I hope Shadow-sama gets his revenge on Amy soon. :3 That would be lovely. Can't wait until you two post the next chappy. ^^
It's great to see that you two were able to post another chapter of A Matter of Trust. Though it did end rather suddenly, I still like how it was wriiten and made the readers hooked. I really like how Shadow was able to wake up and was kind of calml at times; I thought that he was just going to be on a full rampage when he awoke. Great job once again on how you two did this chapter. Everything in the story seems real important and I like how you both did the emotions well of all the characters, as well as the narrative parts, if that's what you call then. Wonderful job overall with this chapter, and I do hope that you two continue real soon.
I have not written, or even read fan-fiction of any sort in over a year and a half, let alone sonic and shadow, but I must say, this story is pulling me back in! This is a first read for myself in this field of fiction, and I absolutely cannot wait for this story to be updated (which I hope to be soon if possible. :)) Very nice I must say though. It is original yet you can see how it could completely tie into the story portrayed from the actual video games. In the more adventurous parts of this particular story, I was thinking that the events could actual happen in Shadow's own upcoming game even. Again, very well done with that. Also, the portrayal of Shadow's pain throughout the story seems very real to the reader, making them feel sympathy for the dark character, even when he is on his murderous rampage, and that can be difficult to come by in some fan-fiction. And the fact that Sonic entered Shadow's mind? My favorite part by far. Very creative, and it doesn't give the reader the feeling of "oh, this is starting to get stupid and over the top," but more along the lines of "Don't bother me, I'm reading!" hah. Before I make this too long and make you fall asleep on me (although when I was a fic-writer myself, I adored long reviews, even though I myself am not good at reviews. sorry :), I hope there is still more to come, and the authors aren't tired of writing! Which tends to happen in the longer stories, sad to say.
Ah... Nice chappie. ^^ Very nice. I like how you guys come up with your own stuff rather than taking something from someone else's story..
*jumps up and down like Oopamon* MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! Anyway... I loved it... I was going so happy, then just before I reached the part where Amy had to screw things up, Supporting Me began to play on my MP... That song always makes an appearance =P Can't wait for next chappy! ^^ (Which reminds me... I gotta get out of my writer's block, and try and make the next chappy of mine...)
XD Amy is now referred..perfect!! ^_^ I love how moo two throw in comedy in your fic. It makes me happy. This chappy was awesome (as usual) It was just so cool and I suck at describing things, so I'll shut up now. *waits for the next chapter patiently*
Great chapter. I liked it. Damn Amy, though. *growls* Why doesn't Chaos or Knuckles just kill her and be done with it? Kill Amy! KILL HER, I SAY!! Um... Looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it won't be TOO LONG. Ciao. :P
Sonic and Shadow (c) and TM SEGA - Sonic Team
Sonadow Online
http://www.sonadow.com
2003-2009