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Name: Makoto (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2005 8:48 PM · For: Chapter Three
Have no fear! Your #1 reviewer, who has been dead, ish here!! /:, I can't believe you have writer's block on Boku no Kage. It breaks my heart, but this story will hold me over. I always think its cute the way Sonic takes care of Shadow-sama. It brings a tear to my eye. The only complaint I have with this chapter is you jump from one scene to another without warning. When Shadow-sama was thrown into the cell, and Sonic was tying a piece of wood to Shadow's broken arm and then he's pacing and Shadow was tying the piece of wood..@_@; it was a wee bit confusing. I'm just waiting for Sonic to kick Eggman's ass |:} Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading. ^_^ You have great talent. And this ish a really long review x_X

Author's Response: Thank goodness, someone found a necromancer hey? Chya. B.n.K is being EVIL! :smashes head: DARN WRITERS BLOCK! I need to get the inspiration... Sonic has a /mild/ crush on Shadow. Sorry about that, most new chapters are new scenes... Um, actually Sonic set the arm, then started pacing. Thanks Makoto :glomps Makoto:


Name: Fatpanda3000 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2005 12:06 PM · For: Chapter Three
....think I'm the only one who wants to review. But that doesn't matter. I like your story very much (finally new stories in here). so, please keep writing.^^ (Sorry for Mistakes. German^^ :hands up:)

Author's Response: :girlish squee: THANK YOU! I am so happy someone likes this... ^_^ I am so happy... ^_^ :glomps Fatpanda3000:


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