This is an amazing story. I actually started to tear up while reading this. You did a woderful job.
Whoa...I'm honestly speechless. I kinda want to cry...why is that? I never cry over a story...
A beautifully tragic story. Although it invokes sad and upsetting emotions on the one hand it blossoms into a true love story for these two characters and shows how love can transcend death. A bittersweet ending that always makes for a good read. Thank you!
Woah...
*sob*
Such a sad tale before the holidays. Despite it's depressing nature, it's quite lovely. I loved the emotions that played without the entire story, such as loneliness that comes when being ignored. In the end, it's bittersweet and manages to look back on it with some gratitude--if I had actually cried, I'd be ashamed to read it again.
You provoke curious emotions throughout your stories which always intrigue me. Thank you for submitting this and everything else. :)
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