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Shadow said sorry. Half the world shall explode as dachshunds become our new leaders. All jokes aside, brilliant characterization as usual. His hesitation tells the reader that he's not exactly used to saying such a phrase. And the way that Sonic hangs onto every little mumble Shadow makes an example of the idol-like love he has for the other. The way he lashes out with words against Shadow's berating going too far is genius.
(Two spelling errors: apologise-apologize, which was in the third paragraph, and pretences-pretenses, which occurred in the sixth paragraph.) No serious errors at all were in this chapter and some great character development occurred. You leave me eager to know how these two are going to live on an island together. Even though Sonic loves Shadow, the two are still very much like two scorpions in a bottle. Great chapter, as always. ^^

Author's Response: Thanks for all your intelligent and researched reviews. They make me very happy. ^^ This was originally going to be a two-shot but I can't stop now.