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OMGOSH OMGOSH OMGOSH can't wait for more

Author's Response: When I get there...eventually. *dies*

i like it. reallt good. do you think that you could write more of it, perhaps? ^^

Author's Response: I'm getting there. The next chapter has been hard to write, but I'm getting there. Slowly. Don't worry, this story won't be abandoned like so many others on this site. *wipes away a tear* Thanks for the comment and the rating!

As soon as I saw the title, I knew that this would have something to do with Sonic and his obsessive...obsession. A very interesting chapter, and the comparison with the Sonic/Amy relationship to the relationship in this makes the reader see the two in a completely different way. I tip my hat to you for that idea.
In the eleventh paragraph, Sonic says "IgavemtotheBlakAms, which a lack of end quotations. Perhaps you meant "Igave'mtotheBlackArms." or "IgavethemtotheBlackArms." In the eleventh chapter from the end, you said "alter" instead of "later." Another suggestion would be that after Shadow's thought, you went to Sonic. This may confuse some because they think that Shadow is still think it. Perhaps draw the reader's attention back to Sonic though an action or whatnot?
All in all, a genius chapter. I love your characterization and this story seems to get better and better. I wonder how this race is going to turn out. (And who needs disclaimers? XP)

Author's Response: Thank-you! :D Sonic babble of 'IgavemtotheBlakAms,' was intentional, although the lack of end punctuation wasn't, and I'll fix that. That was to show he was spitting it out as fast as he could so Shadow didn't hear all too well. Thanks for the review, one of the highlights of every submission. Thankyou! ^^