I wish there was more to this... I dont quite understand whats going on with the whole slave guild and the government. But as incomplete in explanation that might be, it was still a great read.
Wow... what is WRONG with you?? This is seriously one of the best fanfics I have ever read! Seriously. It's nice to see somone out there with a great respect for the english language. =_= I didn't even see any TYPODS in this fic. Very well done, very dark, and yet, oddly interesting. I'd never imagine getting much joy into reading a story about rape, but this was really captivating from the first paragraph. I couldn't help but finish the entire thing! It's too bad this one wont be continued, but luckily you have many more fictions to read! Thanks for writing this wonderful fanfic!
Wow... what is WRONG with you?? This is seriously one of the best fanfics I have ever read! Seriously. It's nice to see someone out there with a great respect for the english language. =_= I didn't even see any TYPOS in this fic. Very well done, very dark, and yet, oddly interesting. I'd never imagine getting much joy into reading a story about rape, but this was really captivating from the first paragraph. I couldn't help but finish the entire thing! It's too bad this one wont be continued, but luckily you have many more fictions to read! Thanks for writing this wonderful fanfic!
Wow, Eggman is either really screwed or he's... no wait. He's just screwed. Great story btw!
Wow, Eggman is either really screwed or he's... no wait. He's just screwed. Great story btw!
Author's Response: oooooooh I\'m gonna have to watch some scary movies to get some inspiration
Sonic is going to wupp some ass! Great story, I really like it. :3 Nothing's cooler than a steamy, romantic affair. IN SECRET. ;3 Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: xD oh thank you!!! its like.. an HONOUR getting a review off you.. especially a good one!! *hugs you*
Wow what a crazy woman. I sure hope she gets whats coming to her. :P Great writing, I didnt notice any huge mistakes or anything. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and now I\'m thinking of making a sequel to this.
This is a great story. :3 I just read through it all and I absolutely love it. I'm so glad to see such an articulate writer here on sonadow.com. I hope to read more soon. X3
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