^_^ Oh this story makes me laugh in a decidedly evil way. I love it! -adds to favorites-
Write another chapter soon, okay?
Author's Response: Ah yes, always nice to laugh decidedly evily. If that sentence was gramatically incorrect, you have my permission to not give a damn and join in the evil laughter.
I\'ll get the next chapter out as soon as humanly possible. And thanks for the fave!
I'm really curious about what Necros is writing... and plus, I wanna know what he knows about the little girl. Her name was Emily right?
=3 Can I have the imaginary pike with the imaginary head?
Author's Response: Yes it was, and I\'m hoping you made that connection to Chapters 3 and 5.
It\'s obvious he\'s writing some sort of a diary or something from the end of the chapter...but as to what\'s in it, well *smirk*
Sure, you can have the imaginary head/pike. I\'ll just trace where you live using my imaginary hacking program and send it to you via imaginary Fed-Ex. Or is imaginary UPS better?
^_^ Yay, I like it! I'm excited for the next chapter, which I hope will come soon, right?
Author's Response: I will keep going..but speed has never been my fortei.
Yay! -claps- I like it! It's really interesting! And I have no clue why anyone would flame it... But if they do, you can always chaos control them into the sun. =D
Update soon!
Author's Response: *blush* Why thank you.. ^^
=D I really loved this! You're definitely a great writer, and I have added this to my favorites!
I did notice this sentence that makes me wonder if you had a comma splice going on: "He, after scanning the room for seating comfortable enough to sit and read in apart from the couch, and finding none, took a seat next to Sonic and began reading." I don't think the comma before 'and finding none' needs to be there. =D But it probably doesn't even really matter! It was just bothering me while I read the line, I was like... 'ARGH, I always make this mistake, is it right or wrong?!'
Anyway, enough of my useless prattling. I
Author's Response: Well, with or without the comma, that sentence bothered me. But I couldn\'t be arsed to change it. But thank you for pointing it out. Part of me wants to say it\'s right, but it won\'t surprise me if it\'s a mistake.
-Jester
maa, maa... for a first short story it was good! I liked it! I think it could have been a bit more fleshed out, tho. demo... that's just me. ^_^ You did well!
Author's Response: Thank you soo much. :3
Shadow discovers Sonic’s philosophical side one night atop a snowy mountain. Or he thinks he does… either way, he’ll never consider the good and the bad in the same light again.
I liked it! Sonic's pretty twisted... xD I can't write Sonic that way, but it's interesting when other people can. It certainly is a different view on what people imagine is good and evil...and possibly crazy. :D
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