So far this story is pretty cool! I really like it, already there was a bit of action, small, but still-action! Wonder why Sonic felt drawn in when he first saw Shadow's eyes? And wonder when Shadow (and us readers) will get to hear more of what Sonic has gone through? Also Shadow said that the professor chicks name sounded familiar. Where could he have heard it at/from? And what was said about her when he heard her name? I really hope that you will update soon as I can't wait to see what you have in store for them!

I think you're doing a great job so far. This is an interesting twist, and I love it.

This is so wonderfullly written! I love it! The plot is so good, too!! Please continue soon--I love this story!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it~~ I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as I get the muses to cooperate. >: They're being rather stubborn and it makes it rather hard to write. >:

Hm, I really like Shadow's personality. I like how cruel he is to Sonic. :P Update soon, I like where this is going. x)

Author's Response: xD;; . . . Well, that's quite loving. I'm sure Sonic secretly enjoys how cruel Shadow is being to him as well. It must make him quite happy in the pan---nevermind. *SHOT* Anyways~ Glad you're enjoying it~~ I'll update as soon as I can get my mind back on track. xD; Having a little trouble with the muses here~

Nice chapter. ^^ I hope GUN doesn't find 'em.... And ya gotta wonder how that input got stuck in Sonic. Characters stayed in character through the whole thing. Good work. ^^

Author's Response: Thanks~~ And that was actually one of the things I was paranoid about. xD; I'm used to writing as Sonic because I RP him all the time. . .But I was rather worried about how my Shadow and Maria were. xD; And yes. >: G.U.N. r teh_bastards. >: