Another good chapter!  There are a few English errors here and there, but nothing too jarring.  Do you have someone to read things over for you, before you post them?  That might be something to look into.  :)

I really enjoyed when Sonic was sitting in the doorway and talking.  Who was he talking to, and why?  I have my suspicions, but I'll wait until we find out the answer to see if I'm right...

You seem to be very productive, when you get bored!  I'm looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it's finished.

Author's Response:

I don't really have anyone, I'm a bit too shy to ask for help. I feel like I'm being a nuisance when I ask people for stuff :/

Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying it!