Okay, I'm going to be strait with you, your stories arn't very good, all of them.
They all severly lack details of any kind, there's no emotion, the plots barly make sense, and the chapters arn't even FINISHED when you post them!
The only "good" thing about them is that you update alot, but with writting, it's QUALITY over QUANTITY!
Listen, spend more time on the chapters, make them descriptive, and acually FINISH the chapters before you post them, and they might turnout better.
Good luck!
You'll need it...

Author's Response: alright... thx for the advice.. i only don't finish them because I don't have time. I have to share the computer with 5 other people.. T_T I guess i'll just write them in microsoft word then update!

the fun don't stop eh? xD lol im loving it, keep up the great work

Author's Response: thanks! i'm writing a story in a book, but i'm not going to post it on here. So if anyone want's to read it, i'll be glad enough to e-mail it to them one chapter at a time. Just e-mail me at sonadowluver@yahoo.com and tell me you want to read 'love and war'