Hi! I barely have the time to read this story (I Hate School!) but I want to give you at least 1 review.
This is an interesting story and it seems to be a long one too. To be honest, I haven’t fully understood this story. It’s still many questions I want an answer to, like; Who’s that creepy girl? But you probably gonna tell that later on in the story.
About that more “sonadowy” moment in this chapter… It was really good. It’s a perfect change-over between dislike (at least in Shadows case) and slight friendship. I just hope Shadow isn’t too seriously injured. What happened, anyway?!?
Great story! Can’t wait too read next chapter. ^ ^


Author's Response: Probably one of the reasons it's hard to understand is that I'm desperately trying NOT to give away a literal ton of answers. The reason being is not so much the suspense as the fact that I'm working on a flash animated series of a very similar storyline and I don't want to spoil that by revealing certain things in this. One way or another, you will find out exactly who the girl is (and believe me, it's good.) As for what happened to Shadow, he had a kind of violent spasm which may or may not have been related to a certain someone's actions previously... Glad you liked it, btw.