Lol yes.. it was VERY descriptive.... i liked it ^.^
My internet was gone ALL day yesterday O.o' so i couldn't even review anyones stories -.-'
lol I'm glad your updating these finally :D
Author's Response: I WAS ON VACATION! lol. my next chappie wont be so descriptive, so don't expect it to be.. ^^' I LURVE DEVIANTART!! heh..
*speechless*
Author's Response: lol... the next chapter wont be as.. sad.. see? Isn't it more descriptive??
I hope you understand what I'm saying...
You can make plots... you can make pretty good plots, all you have to do is work on bringing them to life...
There's your helpful advice from me...
Author's Response: Yea, I do. ^ ^ and thx! Uh.. Yea.. I have an idea for the next chapter, though it's kinda farfetched.. heh.. Oh well. I know I don't write too detailed, but I really don't know too much.. Everything I know, I learned off this site.. I'm only going into 8th grade, so my voacbulary is... well, you get it.. lol..
I mean, as bad at writing as you are, you can create plots.
You have... what... like, 6 stories?
And you can make a pretty good for each of them...
You can't exacute them very well... but you can create them...
Now I suggest you come up with your own thing, and not let other make choices like this for you...
I hope at least some of this sinks in...
*sigh*
I've been following your storys... all of them, and I have one word to sum them ALL up...
Mediocore...
Now, while it is my intention to offer advice to help you improve your work, but let you do your thing, I have to draw the line here.
If you're asking others to give you the plot of your story, insted of making it yourself... it's not your story anymore...
As bad as your stories are, as detailed lacking as they are, they where original, you made them yourself, and THAT is what writing is all about.
AWESOME! MAN I THINK YOUR OUT DOING YOURSELF! I HAVE NO IDEA FOR NEXT CHAPTER NO LOT NO NUTTIN NADA ZIP ZERO! SRY
*cries* i practically worship Resident evil 2 as much as sonadow :P ask your dad..
Well i'll pull it off somehow xD It shouldn't be hard... I couldn't believe the simalarites between Sonic/Leon and Shadow/Ada
one problem - i first have to write one of those copyright speeches :P
dammit... well i haven't played snails myself xD
Author's Response: It's a cool game, where you are a team of snails and you try to blow the other up using Bombs, guns, launchers etc. LOL
oh theres been something i've been meaning to ask you...
have you ever played Resident Evil 2?
cause i want to make a crossover sonadow fiction. and i was wondering if you wanted to co-write it with me?
If you haven't played it, it's okay though the other day i found out that it could easily be turned into a sonadow..
Author's Response: gr.. sorry, I haven't.. sure my dad has though, so I could ask him what it's about.. lol. He'd probably download it onto his palm just for the fun of it! Lol. Ohh.. Have you ever played a game called 'Snails' ? It's funny...
hehe ok it'll probably be up by tommorow now... my labtop is acting up, and its saved on there :S
sorry :P
Author's Response: YAY!!!!!!!! *throws party* lol
hmm well you said earlier he drew pictures of what he though he didn't know. He could go back and start drawing more? and putting them in an order of events... something like that?
Author's Response: hm.. I like the idea!! ^ ^ yay!! Thanks! ^^
Author's Response: Gr... UPDATE YOUR STORY!! lol.. I wanna read it! *cries* lol
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