O.o' what am i going to do about it?
*grabs the GUN military* attack the creatures! mwhahahaha >;) lol joke
Author's Response: Lol!
Not bad, you had a good bit of emotion, and added some pretty good details.
Nice chapter, probably one of your best...
Your chapters still needs alot of work...
But never~the-less, not bad... not at all really...
Author's Response: Thanks alot! ^^
oh i see now ^.^' i don't want shadow to go back yet :( he should spend the night wth sonic xD and hopefully it will not be disturbed ;D haha, i can only wish though :P
Author's Response: who said they weren't going to?? *shifts eyes around room* heh
^.^ mwhaha i love amy abuse... it just makes sonadow more funnier. I still don't get how shadow's quills were sticking out though :S what postion was he in for them to stick out? @.@ oh well, its still a Great story xD
Author's Response: he was under a short bed, so his quills were brushing along the bottom, sprawled out all over. That's how the tip of a few were sticking out. ^^
Awsome, its cool and its great that you also keep up with your other stories too! Great job
Author's Response: i'm working on one of them ATM, so don't worry! ^^
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ^_^
I'm alive! done with the project and you are a 7th grader so I'm one year ahead of you since I'm in 8th ^^ great story and look out for Reborn or I MIGHT make another one bye
Author's Response: YAY!!
"impressing anyone?" are you kidding me? i've been impressed with this story from the start! vampire sonadow's are the best, especially if its sonic ^.^ can't wait for more
Okay, that was alot better, I'll give that... and thank you.
It was more descriptive, and and was FINISHED!
But yes, good job, you're still a long ways away from truly impressing anyone...
But nice job...
Author's Response: Thank you! ^ ^
Okay, I'm going to be strait with you, your stories arn't very good, all of them.
They all severly lack details of any kind, there's no emotion, the plots barly make sense, and the chapters arn't even FINISHED when you post them!
The only "good" thing about them is that you update alot, but with writting, it's QUALITY over QUANTITY!
Listen, spend more time on the chapters, make them descriptive, and acually FINISH the chapters before you post them, and they might turnout better.
Good luck!
You'll need it...
Author's Response: alright... thx for the advice.. i only don't finish them because I don't have time. I have to share the computer with 5 other people.. T_T I guess i'll just write them in microsoft word then update!
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