This is the same thing that's addictive about my favorites among your drawings, the mixing in of down to Earth stuff like condoms and lube (seriously, not kidding, that fumbling about makes it all the more romantic and hot to me) and that there's just enough detail to make it physical, but not enough to make it boring. Still plenty for me to fill in. ^///^

There are some spelling mistakes here... But this is kinda old, and I'm bound to go read it again (seeing as how this is my second or third read today), so I'll get back to that if you care.

I'd think Sonic would have more immediate understanding for Shadow being called out like that... Obviously, he doesn't tell Sonic even the basics of what he does, but you'd think Sonic would be worried, more than anything, if he went missing for a week. And I think his anger would slip away pretty quick if he noticed Shadow was actually injured.

...Forgot to mention, I like Rouge's part as sanity and health saving best friend in this. I like her, I feel like she gets overlooked a lot in these kinds of fics.

 

I've loved all the awkward stuff before (I'm a sucker for that) and I'm loving how they're getting more and more easy about it now! Gah, this thing is making me squee with laughter. <3 And my face must be tinted a happy neon pink. ^///^

Oh, and playful/shameless Sonic for. The. Win. I can totally see him act like that XD

I'll go back later to write reviews for the first chapters, I promise - but you don't make it easy to stop between them, ya know.

Excellent!

I love how this story is going!...Do ya love me now:D