strange but really cool! :-)

-did ya like it?
naturally, of course.
-Whose side are you on?
Whose side am I on....hm....I'll have to take Sonic's side on this one
-Most interesting moments
I'd have to say that I liked Sonic's reaction to the whole thing.

So to elaborate on what I mentioned earlier, I take Sonic's side because in this situation I think he'd come out on top...maybe not get the ket that he wants, but in his own way. That OR it's going to end up like last time where Shadow was PWNing Sonic and then they got a lil' too close making Sonic freak out....but hey, better Shadow then that Dingo thing or Jet, right?

Anyway, I'm not a huge fan of the chapter title, but it works for the chapter :3
anyway, I agree with everyone else in the fact that: You did a good job and I await the next chapter.

Author's Response: Not a huge fan of the chapter title, huh? XD I admit, it was something of a last-minute thing...if you have any suggestions, lemme hear them! :D Apart from that, thanks lots for the detailed review!

Wow. Well, I have to say, if I was Sonic, I'd be pretty upset too. And with all that adrenaline pumping through him, that'd be a hard fight for Shadow to beat. But honestly, I can't see Sonic doing too much damage to Shadow because all in all, Sonic is a hero. He probably would rough him up a bit, though. xD

Well, Shadow doesn't really know the full story, hopefully he'll listen and then think about giving him the key. Great chapter, way to leave us hanging. Update ASAP!

Author's Response: One update, as requested! :P As for whether Shads will actually listen (or if Sonic feels like sitting down and explaining at the moment) please read on...thanks for the review!

Hmm. I liked this chapter. I think (strangely) for the lack of dialogue and the amount of description.

So, when Shads and Sonic get back to their own time period there's going to be ALOT of explaining to do, huh? XD ha ha ha, that should be interesting.

'and when Shadow turned around again, all he could do was just to drape the blanket over the body of his supposed slave, self-declared rival, beautiful pet…and unadmitted lover and friend.'
I like this, yeah it's Sonadow, but not (as of late) harsh and forward, subtle and sweet.

Mmm....still can't find the emerald....bother, betcha Doom keeps it on his persons! ;)

Anywho, I'm absolutely curious as to what Sonic's verbal response would be st Shadow suggesting that the other Sonic may like his master.

Ha, that took a whike, anywho, so far...still love it. :) good job and thanks for updating.

OMG I wanna see more of the other Sonic and Shadow! ;.;