Rated: G - Clean
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Category: Sonadow
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance/Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 12896 | Read count: 114161
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Published: August 02, 2007 | Updated: August 21, 2007
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six
I've loved all the awkward stuff before (I'm a sucker for that) and I'm loving how they're getting more and more easy about it now! Gah, this thing is making me squee with laughter. <3 And my face must be tinted a happy neon pink. ^///^
Oh, and playful/shameless Sonic for. The. Win. I can totally see him act like that XD
I'll go back later to write reviews for the first chapters, I promise - but you don't make it easy to stop between them, ya know.
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven
This is so casual and plain comforting to read. ^^ It keeps making me all warm and fuzzy on the inside XD
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight
I'd think Sonic would have more immediate understanding for Shadow being called out like that... Obviously, he doesn't tell Sonic even the basics of what he does, but you'd think Sonic would be worried, more than anything, if he went missing for a week. And I think his anger would slip away pretty quick if he noticed Shadow was actually injured.
...Forgot to mention, I like Rouge's part as sanity and health saving best friend in this. I like her, I feel like she gets overlooked a lot in these kinds of fics.
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four
Yes, everyone loves a good make out scene! And I love the awkward, like to bits, and there's far too little of it in most Sonadow fics XD I chuckle my way through this whole thing, and I swear it's in the most intimate, identification-worthy sense possible. The whole "unsmooth" thing makes it so much more genuine. <3
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five (contest end)
This is the same thing that's addictive about my favorites among your drawings, the mixing in of down to Earth stuff like condoms and lube (seriously, not kidding, that fumbling about makes it all the more romantic and hot to me) and that there's just enough detail to make it physical, but not enough to make it boring. Still plenty for me to fill in. ^///^
There are some spelling mistakes here... But this is kinda old, and I'm bound to go read it again (seeing as how this is my second or third read today), so I'll get back to that if you care.
Rated: NC17 - Adult
[Reviews - 39]Category: Sonadow
Characters: None
Genres: Romance/Fluff
Warnings: Sex
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 5780 | Read count: 7252
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Published: January 11, 2008 | Updated: January 13, 2008
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three
You're killing me! This is awesome. All the nervosity, and the am-I-doing-this-right.
God, the first one. XD And all the falling off the couch and aftermath of it all...
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four
I kind of really like these "what is everyone else up to" chapters of stories, it doesn't feel like filler to me. I'd like it even more if it gave some idea of what's going on in general, if Rouge has missions, and the likes...
Heh, and the more of how they put up with each other you add, the better. Put a neat freak and a slob in the same place and you're bound to have trouble XD
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five
I think there's a mis-match between lines there at the start; Sonic's answer doesn't make sense unless Shadow asked if he was too tired or something.
I lay snickering over my desktop. And honestly... Stuff like making mistakes and ruining the mood, but being able to get a laugh out of it later is dead romantic to me.
Also, yes! It only makes sense Sonic would be good at least at basic cooking, considering he's been hiking around on his own so much.